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What is an action title on a slide?

An action title is a slide headline written as a complete sentence that states what the slide concludes, rather than naming its topic. Revenue by region is a topic title; the northern region drove two thirds of growth is an action title. Read in order, a deck's action titles should tell the whole argument.

Management consultants write action titles because their decks are read by executives who skim. The habit works just as well for anyone whose slides get forwarded.

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Six topic titles rewritten as action titles (fictional examples)
Topic titleAction title
Revenue by regionThe northern region drove two thirds of this year's growth
Customer survey resultsCustomers value delivery speed over price by two to one
Competitive landscapeNo competitor offers same day installation in regional towns
Churn analysisChurn is concentrated in accounts that never completed onboarding
Cost breakdownFreight now costs more than the product it carries
Next stepsApproving two hires today keeps the March launch on schedule

The headline is the conclusion

A topic title tells the audience what a slide is about. An action title tells them what to think about it. The difference changes how a slide is read: with a topic title, the reader studies the chart to work out the point, and different readers reach different points; with an action title, the reader checks whether the chart supports the stated point, which is faster and focuses any disagreement on the claim itself. Action titles are usually one or two lines, written in plain language, and contain a verb and, where possible, a number or a direction. They also make disagreement productive. When a director objects to a slide titled freight now costs more than the product it carries, the meeting debates freight costs, which is the useful argument, instead of spending five minutes establishing what the chart was meant to show.

Where the habit comes from

The practice is most closely associated with management consulting, and particularly with the writing discipline Barbara Minto developed while editing reports at McKinsey between 1963 and 1973. Her Minto Pyramid Principle holds that ideas are easiest to grasp when presented as a pyramid under a single point, with each point above summarising the ones below. In a deck, each slide's action title is a point in that pyramid, and the titles read in order become the storyline. Consultants often draft these titles first in a ghost deck, before any charts exist. In science and engineering, Michael Alley's assertion evidence approach reaches the same place independently, with sentence headlines over visual evidence.

How to write one

Look at the slide's evidence and ask what a busy reader should conclude. Write that conclusion as a sentence with a subject and a verb. Add a number if the evidence has one. Check the title against the chart: every word should be supported by what is shown. Then read all the titles of the deck in order, without the slides. If they tell a coherent story with no gaps or repetition, the deck's structure is sound. If two titles say the same thing, merge the slides; if the story jumps, a slide is missing.

Common mistakes

The first is a sentence that is still a topic, such as this slide shows revenue by region. The second is overclaiming, where the title says more than the evidence supports, which invites the audience to distrust the whole deck. The third is titles so long they wrap to three or four lines and push the evidence down. The fourth is jargon and abbreviations that make sense only to the author. The fifth is inconsistency, with action titles on some slides and topic titles on others, so the storyline breaks when read in sequence. The sixth is writing titles last, after the charts, when they should shape which charts get made.

When a topic title is fine

Not every slide makes a claim. A cover, an agenda, a section divider, a team slide and an appendix index are navigation, and a plain topic title serves them well. Some audiences, such as a regulator or a scientific committee, may expect neutral headings on data slides so that they draw their own conclusions first. Judge by the reader: if the slide's job is to persuade or inform a decision, write the conclusion; if its job is to organise, name the section.

Where it shows up in the product

Slide titles here are free text within each template's character budget, so an action title fits any role. When a deck is generated, a planning step first writes a title and a one sentence summary for every slide, and a fill step then writes the content to deliver on that title, so a brief that asks for conclusion headlines shapes the whole deck. There is no step to review those titles before slides appear, but each title can be edited in place afterwards or rewritten by the AI assistant. The case study example on this site puts its headline result in the cover title rather than the customer's name.

Questions people ask

What is the difference between an action title and a topic title?

A topic title names the subject of a slide, such as quarterly revenue. An action title states the conclusion, such as quarterly revenue beat plan for the third time in a row. Topic titles suit navigation slides. Action titles suit slides that present evidence, because they tell the reader what the evidence means.

How long should an action title be?

Usually one or two lines at the slide's heading size, often ten to fifteen words. It should be a full sentence but not a paragraph. If the conclusion needs more words, the slide may be making two points, or the extra detail belongs in a subtitle, a caption or the speaker's explanation.

Are action titles the same as assertion evidence headlines?

They are very close. Both put the conclusion in a sentence headline. Assertion evidence is a fuller design approach from Michael Alley's research that also replaces bullet lists with visual evidence. Action titles are the consulting term and can sit over any kind of slide body, including tables and short lists.

Should every slide have an action title?

Every slide that presents evidence or argues a point should. Covers, agendas, dividers, team slides and appendix pages do not need one, since they make no claim. A useful check is whether the slide would be read differently with a conclusion in the title; if not, a topic title is fine.

How do action titles help a deck that is read without a presenter?

They carry the argument when nobody is there to explain the charts. A reader skimming the deck, or the executive who reads only the headlines, still gets the conclusions in order. That is why consulting reports and board pre reads rely on them even more than presented decks do.

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