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Offer of employment, Data Analyst

Job offer letter

An offer of $98,000 plus $11,760 of superannuation, with the three checks it depends on and a clear instruction not to resign until they clear. The letter also names what is not in the offer, which is the part candidates most often assume.

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Fernhill Analytics
Fernhill Analytics Pty Ltd · ABN 68 227 910 445 · Level 3, 74 Currie Street, Adelaide SA 5000 people@fernhillanalytics.example · 08 8100 2277
Fernhill Analytics
Fernhill Analytics
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Date
Friday 21 August 2026
To
Mr Elliot Nakamura, 9 Grote Lane, Adelaide SA 5000
Reference
OFF-2026-118
Offer lapses
5pm Friday 4 September 2026
Offer of employment, Data Analyst

Dear Elliot, we are delighted to offer you the position of Data Analyst at Fernhill Analytics. The panel was unanimous, and the work you did on the take home task is the reason. This letter sets out the main terms so you can make a decision on them. The full employment contract is attached and is the document that binds us both.

$98,000
Base salary
$11,760
Superannuation
$109,760
Total package
Mon 19 Oct 2026
Start date
The role
Position
Data Analyst, Insights team
Reports to
Simone Achterberg, Head of Insights
Employment type
Full time, ongoing
Ordinary hours
38 a week, Monday to Friday
Location
Level 3, 74 Currie Street, Adelaide, with up to two days a week from home by agreement
Notice period
One week during probation, then as set by the National Employment Standards
What you will be paid
1
Base salary of $98,000 a year
Paid fortnightly in arrears, less tax required to be withheld. This is the figure to compare against other offers, because everything below sits on top of it.
2
Superannuation of $11,760 a year
Twelve per cent of the base salary, paid on top rather than taken out, into a fund of your choosing. That makes the total package $109,760.
3
Annual bonus of up to eight per cent
Up to $7,840 at the current base, assessed each March against team delivery and personal objectives set in the first month. It is discretionary, it is not guaranteed, and the last three years have paid at five, eight and six per cent.
4
A salary review each 1 July
Based on performance and the market. Your first review is 1 July 2027, about nine months after you start, and it is not prorated for a part year.
5
A learning budget of $2,000 a year
For conferences, courses and books, with two paid study days. It does not accumulate, so an unused budget is gone on 30 June.
Leave and conditions
Entitlement
What you get
Annual leave
4 weeks a year, accruing progressively
Personal and carer leave
10 days a year, accruing progressively
Paid parental leave
14 weeks from the company, in addition to the government scheme, after 12 months of service
Public holidays
South Australian public holidays, paid
Probation
6 months, with written feedback at 4 weeks, 3 months and 5 months
Notice after probation
As set by the National Employment Standards, currently 1 week in the first year
What is not in this offer
There is no car allowance, no phone allowance and no equity in the company at this level. A laptop, a monitor for home and a desk allowance of $600 in the first month are provided, and that is the whole of the equipment arrangement. We would rather you knew that now than found out in week two.
This offer depends on three things
1
Evidence of your right to work in Australia
A passport, birth certificate or visa grant notice, sighted before your first day. We check the visa entitlement online and keep only the record of the check, not a copy of the document.
2
Two reference checks
Both must be a manager you reported to directly. You have nominated one and we will ask for a second before 28 August 2026. We do not contact a current employer without your written go ahead.
3
A national police check
Required because the team handles client data under contract. A finding is assessed on relevance to this role and is not automatically disqualifying. Fernhill pays for the check.
Please do not resign until all three are cleared
The offer is conditional until we confirm in writing that the three checks above are complete, which usually takes about five business days from acceptance. Handing in a resignation before that confirmation arrives puts you at risk, and no candidate has ever been asked to.
What happens next
1
Nominate your second referee
By 28 August 2026. Yours to do.
2
Sign and return this letter and the contract
By 5pm Friday 4 September 2026. Yours to do.
3
Reference and police checks
Within five business days. Fernhill runs them.
4
Written confirmation the offer is unconditional
After the checks clear. Fernhill sends it.
5
Onboarding pack, laptop and first week plan
Two weeks out. Fernhill sends it.
6
First day, 9.30am, Level 3 reception
Monday 19 October 2026. Both of us.

If anything here is not what you expected, call Priya Ganesh on 08 8100 2277 before you sign. A question about salary, start date or working from home will not count against you, and we would rather answer it now than in your third month.

To accept, sign below, sign the attached contract, and return both to people@fernhillanalytics.example by 5pm on Friday 4 September 2026. We are looking forward to having you on the team.

Signed for Fernhill Analytics Pty Ltd
Name
:
Position
:
Date
:

I accept the offer of employment set out in this letter and in the attached contract, on the terms described, and confirm that the information I provided during recruitment is true.

Accepted by Elliot Nakamura
Name
:
Date
:

Section by section

What each section is for, so you can keep the ones you need and drop the rest.

Letterhead
The employer, its ABN, address and people inbox, with a private and confidential footer on every page.
Letter header
Date, addressee, reference number and the date and time the offer lapses, before anything else.
Opening
The offer itself, why it was made, and the statement that the attached contract is the binding document.
Package figures
Base salary, superannuation, total package and start date as four numbers.
The role
Position, reporting line, employment type, ordinary hours, location with the hybrid arrangement, and the notice period.
What you will be paid
Five numbered notes on salary, superannuation, the bonus with its history, the review date and the learning budget.
Leave and conditions
Six entitlements including company paid parental leave, probation and the notice position after it.
What is not in this offer
The allowances and equity that are absent, and the equipment arrangement that is present, in one callout.
This offer depends on three things
Right to work evidence, two reference checks and a police check, each with who does it and how it is handled.
Please do not resign yet
The warning that the offer stays conditional until written confirmation, with the usual timeframe.
What happens next
Six steps with the date and the owner of each, from nominating a referee to the first morning.
Closing and acceptance
The invitation to call before signing, the return instruction and lapse date, and both signature blocks.

Clauses in this document

What makes this document work

The package is broken into its parts

Base salary, superannuation on top, total package, then the bonus with three years of actual outcomes and the learning budget with its expiry. A candidate comparing two offers can put these side by side without asking a follow up question.

It tells the candidate not to resign yet

A warning callout says the offer stays conditional until the three checks clear, that this usually takes five business days, and that no candidate has ever been asked to resign earlier. This is the most consequential sentence in any offer letter.

What is not included is stated

No car allowance, no phone allowance, no equity, and the whole of the equipment arrangement in one line. Naming the absences is what stops a difficult conversation in week two.

Questions people ask

Is an offer letter the same as an employment contract?

No. This letter sets out the main terms so a decision can be made on them, and says plainly that the attached contract is the document that binds both parties. Signing the letter alone leaves the detailed terms unagreed.

Should an offer letter have an expiry?

Yes, and a specific one. This offer lapses at 5pm on Friday 4 September 2026 unless an extension is agreed in writing. A lapse date sets a decision point without forcing an answer on the phone.

What conditions can an offer be subject to?

Anything relevant to the role, stated up front. Here that is evidence of the right to work in Australia, two reference checks with managers the candidate reported to, and a national police check that the employer pays for because the team handles client data.

When should a candidate resign from their current job?

After the employer confirms in writing that the conditions have been met. This letter says so explicitly and gives the usual timeframe, because a resignation handed in against a conditional offer is the risk a candidate carries alone.

Why does the letter tell the candidate not to resign yet?

Because the offer is conditional and a candidate who resigns early can be left with nothing. This letter carries the line as its own short section, right after the three conditions. It is one sentence, it protects the candidate, and it protects the employer from a claim if a check comes back badly.

What belongs in the "what is not in this offer" section?

Anything a candidate might reasonably expect that is not being promised. This letter says there is no car allowance, no phone allowance and no equity at this level, and that the laptop, home monitor and $600 desk allowance are the whole equipment arrangement. Writing it down is uncomfortable for one paragraph, and it prevents a much harder conversation in month three.

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